tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post1186494065935674457..comments2023-10-14T09:31:41.455-04:00Comments on Metanoetic Poetics: Reading Chinese Poetry at Rush HourAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-70954813076691616272012-02-29T21:15:16.171-05:002012-02-29T21:15:16.171-05:00Hi Charles, This reminds me a bit of a Rexroth tr...Hi Charles, This reminds me a bit of a Rexroth translation of (I believe) a Japanese poem:<br /><br />Someday you will think of this time<br />in which you are so unhappy<br />and remember it fondly. <br /><br />I don't know that you are so unhappy in the poem, but the poem brings up how the preservation of a moment can somehow redeem it. K.Manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-9824145016865686732011-11-11T17:40:37.516-05:002011-11-11T17:40:37.516-05:00this is wonderful.
Happy Friday.this is wonderful.<br /><br />Happy Friday.Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton https://www.blogger.com/profile/08054955235497418740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-22013183902179969462011-11-10T11:26:13.806-05:002011-11-10T11:26:13.806-05:00Love the poem...love the process. Wonderfully weav...Love the poem...love the process. Wonderfully weaved with great tone and fantastic imagery. I can relate...and it doesn't get any better than that!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-15499650007725587282011-11-10T10:29:26.310-05:002011-11-10T10:29:26.310-05:00a remarkable creation,
it is vivid, haunting, and ...a remarkable creation,<br />it is vivid, haunting, and revealing.<br /><br />enjoyed it very much!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-37493158438947878382011-11-09T23:06:50.164-05:002011-11-09T23:06:50.164-05:00I liked this so much...
Your words...
'This...I liked this so much... <br />Your words... <br />'This poem will go nowhere, a little <br />ashamed of itself, not knowing <br />why it came to be. Why it exists, '<br />... tell me what I could relate to.. and I am not going anywhere...<br />Thanks for sharing...<br /><br />Shashi<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/Shashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-36110349202630996202011-11-09T16:57:55.597-05:002011-11-09T16:57:55.597-05:00This poem goes a lot of places, forward and back, ...This poem goes a lot of places, forward and back, between the worlds of strangers and self, and the draw of commonality and affinity we can feel for each other, despite time and death or divergent lives. Your style is clean and clear, and this is an excellent poem.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-71958650467535893682011-11-09T11:09:31.717-05:002011-11-09T11:09:31.717-05:00I always keep it in my head as I take a peek aroun...I always keep it in my head as I take a peek around, so they do not see, great capture of the scene.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-40144516097826989222011-11-09T01:36:18.053-05:002011-11-09T01:36:18.053-05:00Nicely done. I like the way you are inspired to wo...Nicely done. I like the way you are inspired to wonder about those around you because of how a poem made you feel. The power of poetry!Joanne Young Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14431836725661024756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-45519085538125746852011-11-08T23:40:58.832-05:002011-11-08T23:40:58.832-05:00very cool piece man...you captured a moment, i won...very cool piece man...you captured a moment, i wonder now what people think when they see me writing near them, but you made them special..and echoed another poet that touched you heart...i like this...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-86342088203401493122011-11-04T20:42:21.892-04:002011-11-04T20:42:21.892-04:00Kerryann, That touching was so odd, I remember. I...Kerryann, That touching was so odd, I remember. I am not even sure she knew I was writing about her or maybe even there. That ability, as you say, to connect with the unspoken, unseen, in a space of absence fills the poem with an exhilaration, I think, in the face of joyous nothingness. Thank so much for coming by again! :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-84315461704858386962011-11-04T20:39:17.458-04:002011-11-04T20:39:17.458-04:00Thanks, Fred, reality is not always transitional t...Thanks, Fred, reality is not always transitional to mind, so I'm glad you picked up on that in this poem. Often poetry gives an illusion that things transform from instant to instant without jumps, but quantum physics belies that notion, no? :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-87934855120889025572011-11-04T20:36:45.900-04:002011-11-04T20:36:45.900-04:00Judy, the element of time and how it is always jus...Judy, the element of time and how it is always just leaving or just arriving is such a part of who we are, and so I am happy that I was able to capture that and share it with you.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-63637078773795003822011-11-04T20:34:50.123-04:002011-11-04T20:34:50.123-04:00Beez, You are always very generous in your praise....Beez, You are always very generous in your praise. The visual as emotion, capturing the instant in all its presence/absence is a passion for me. Thank you for understanding.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-45589345633752672532011-11-04T09:15:58.598-04:002011-11-04T09:15:58.598-04:00a gentle reflective moment, between strangers mirr...a gentle reflective moment, between strangers mirroring, but not needing to connect on the physical plane, by touch or external dialogue, but somewhere else, beyond, with an unacknowledged shared reaching out, a mutual humanity, unspoken with the woman, unspeakable to the poet from a thousand years ago, in silent words, writtenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-82461055968720924422011-11-04T00:28:28.908-04:002011-11-04T00:28:28.908-04:00Cool piece. Love the choppy flash of mental progr...Cool piece. Love the choppy flash of mental progression and an excellent concluding stanza. Nice Job, thanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-52375681664578186232011-11-03T22:42:21.751-04:002011-11-03T22:42:21.751-04:00Oh you make me just aaaah I love love your beeUtif...Oh you make me just aaaah I love love your beeUtiful gift to express the visual and emotions you give me the reader is so poignant I am in love with your poetry beez :))beezknezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06115744954977329924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-71430214737168655832011-11-03T18:25:28.316-04:002011-11-03T18:25:28.316-04:00What a wonderful poem, it's voice haunted, obs...What a wonderful poem, it's voice haunted, observant, reflective. Thanks for the ride and the time travel. JudyUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04705593548772037652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-75478008789361672892011-11-03T18:11:24.169-04:002011-11-03T18:11:24.169-04:00Thank you again, J.Thank you again, J.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-19798379392757788072011-11-03T18:07:40.018-04:002011-11-03T18:07:40.018-04:00Shared this on Facebook Charles I really like it.j...Shared this on Facebook Charles I really like it.j.pantechniconpoet@wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05101686410013251087noreply@blogger.com