tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post1712610740326655839..comments2023-10-14T09:31:41.455-04:00Comments on Metanoetic Poetics: OtterAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-31595117144926287112011-11-27T10:22:01.565-05:002011-11-27T10:22:01.565-05:00One of the signs of age are the friends we don'...One of the signs of age are the friends we don't see but somehow count because of the intensity of how we came together. Then we loose them and the pain is worse because of the times we were going to call, were going to visit...John (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-62287693587783526072011-11-27T04:41:11.039-05:002011-11-27T04:41:11.039-05:00Not easy to get into, but more than worth the effo...Not easy to get into, but more than worth the effort. Congratulations on a fine write.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-38350281180491409922011-11-26T19:12:57.889-05:002011-11-26T19:12:57.889-05:00"poems like a morning campfire" is very ..."poems like a morning campfire" is very nice, although I gotta say I'm also a fan of Artaud! But I love the transition from that to the splash of the otter.<br /><br />I'm a little confused about the rape - who perpetrator and who victim - but that line "betray time and love and ourselves" makes me pause. I wonder sometimes if that will be my fate, if, somehow, it Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-8944042276063304532011-11-26T18:42:22.131-05:002011-11-26T18:42:22.131-05:00What a lovely tribute to your friend... I like the...What a lovely tribute to your friend... I like the nostalgia specially your last line. <br /><br />Enjoyed it very much ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-82620273200843793252011-11-26T17:49:15.465-05:002011-11-26T17:49:15.465-05:00some really great verse such as:
A mind as fine a...some really great verse such as:<br /><br />A mind as fine as Euclid's proofs. <br /><br />I'd dive into time to see you again.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-6402363442255137442011-11-26T16:46:05.671-05:002011-11-26T16:46:05.671-05:00how we betray time...cutting sentence for those wh...how we betray time...cutting sentence for those who have wasted it, terrificChristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-62751567441925723622011-11-26T16:40:12.164-05:002011-11-26T16:40:12.164-05:00dang...what a tale...makes me think of the guy fro...dang...what a tale...makes me think of the guy from into the wild a bit...living ont he edge that way...ack on the rape part, makes me shiver and angry...great response to the prompt...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-82560676149458424232011-11-26T16:13:09.205-05:002011-11-26T16:13:09.205-05:00I feel like I've been on the "inside"...I feel like I've been on the "inside" of a relationship. That is a real talent...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-69049181865616464902011-11-26T15:35:15.051-05:002011-11-26T15:35:15.051-05:00The past is a powerful drug, like the fumes inhale...The past is a powerful drug, like the fumes inhaled by the Delphic seers, you never know whether it's poison or that fine edge of clarity that slices through the confusion to the suddenly obvious. You've drawn a vivid portrait here, of both narrator and subject, and where they meet. Fine fine poem.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-69783069388622576112011-11-26T15:20:10.784-05:002011-11-26T15:20:10.784-05:00dang charles...this is tough write..i like how you...dang charles...this is tough write..i like how you allow us in..almost a bit like entering your brain, your memories, the fine spun threads of thoughts.. fascinating and captivating..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com