tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post4314505584236568220..comments2023-10-14T09:31:41.455-04:00Comments on Metanoetic Poetics: cracks in the mirrorAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-12626056140609739242012-01-08T22:48:57.696-05:002012-01-08T22:48:57.696-05:00I love this:
But truth's as shy as a zebra mo...I love this:<br /><br />But truth's as shy as a zebra moth <br />hiding beneath the porch light,<br />hidden in plain sightLaurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-10100384158212513392012-01-08T15:29:46.954-05:002012-01-08T15:29:46.954-05:00the ending is very deep
bumble beethe ending is very deep<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/01/08/bumble-bee/" rel="nofollow">bumble bee</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-42915537504083217932012-01-08T15:15:21.581-05:002012-01-08T15:15:21.581-05:00stellar opening stanza! And that fault line betwe...stellar opening stanza! And that fault line between trust and deception I can so relate to. Not sure if my mirror is cracked yet, still trying to figure that one out - which is probably why the fault line bit jumped out at me. very thought-provoking.Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-39566602139580753582012-01-08T07:24:21.788-05:002012-01-08T07:24:21.788-05:00Really deep..Really deep..Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02399300464457820101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-46924329324349234982012-01-08T07:04:41.618-05:002012-01-08T07:04:41.618-05:00ha - great ending...great poem..esp. loved the..tr...ha - great ending...great poem..esp. loved the..truth's as shy as a zebra moth hiding beneath the porch light.. this is very cool charlesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-82338377105443745862012-01-07T22:44:05.487-05:002012-01-07T22:44:05.487-05:00dude...love the closing lines...several great ones...dude...love the closing lines...several great ones through out...truth is hiding in plain sight you know...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-77104988898781992862011-09-03T14:17:42.231-04:002011-09-03T14:17:42.231-04:00Thanks guys. I appreciate your droppong by, readin...Thanks guys. I appreciate your droppong by, reading, and taking a second to comment. hwyl fawr!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-22071122682510324952011-09-03T09:10:11.939-04:002011-09-03T09:10:11.939-04:00I like this piece...
I love this part
losing itsel...I like this piece...<br />I love this part<br />losing itself in the rain<br />that will not absolve me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-19048357909734819662011-09-03T00:21:28.437-04:002011-09-03T00:21:28.437-04:00Likes this.Likes this.pantechniconpoet@wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05101686410013251087noreply@blogger.com