tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post8255890754154626384..comments2023-10-14T09:31:41.455-04:00Comments on Metanoetic Poetics: Meat of the DayAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-6304247998188801732011-11-17T13:57:33.161-05:002011-11-17T13:57:33.161-05:00Who writes about the ding dong work day that we en...Who writes about the ding dong work day that we endure en route to the next poem? Wonderful to see you do, and with such clarity of heart. It's Ceasar's world in which we earn our meat; you carve it so well. - BrendanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-49007003377450877542011-11-17T09:48:06.808-05:002011-11-17T09:48:06.808-05:00Hi Charles Miller
A great imagery you have shared...Hi Charles Miller<br /><br />A great imagery you have shared with us. I enjoyed it so much... Lovely.<br /><br />Shashi<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-where-you-will-go.htmlShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-16236592063924361612011-11-15T22:50:17.058-05:002011-11-15T22:50:17.058-05:00The imagery flows with every line, wonderful verse...The imagery flows with every line, wonderful verse.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-48633007359698530082011-11-15T22:21:02.354-05:002011-11-15T22:21:02.354-05:00You've incorporated so many sensory details he...You've incorporated so many sensory details here: texture, color, sound. I especially like the line "What shall I lay upon the altar to bless the day" and then go on to consecrate the mundane. Brilliant. VictoriaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-19724982178135753312011-11-15T20:45:34.577-05:002011-11-15T20:45:34.577-05:00Very impressive. Imagery is outstanding as others ...Very impressive. Imagery is outstanding as others have already mentionedSheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-42272134820071834132011-11-15T18:41:14.105-05:002011-11-15T18:41:14.105-05:00Brilliant imagery here--just blinding. Your langua...Brilliant imagery here--just blinding. Your language is musical and vivid, precise and succinct, all the virtues I can catalog, and still not get to the heart of why this works so well--that lies in the unspoken. Fine fine poem.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-57888262941136585202011-11-15T18:17:42.029-05:002011-11-15T18:17:42.029-05:00nice....really enjoy this and all the textures..th...nice....really enjoy this and all the textures..the concrete cracks lost tongues...def feel the flow through out this...what will i put on the altar, all i got is my words and you used yours well...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-74123056044054168862011-11-10T01:42:51.282-05:002011-11-10T01:42:51.282-05:00"The concrete has teeth,
and the cracks cry w..."The concrete has teeth,<br />and the cracks cry with lost tongues." Great line, and also "these carve our lives<br />into the meat of the day." <br />Very nice, powerful imagery in this piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-47807886609048047242011-11-09T14:29:18.887-05:002011-11-09T14:29:18.887-05:00hey charles, enjoyed your poem...the burden of eve...hey charles, enjoyed your poem...the burden of everyday life..unsung black men wait en masse at the bus stop..sometimes not easy to find the way through ice and rain..ugh...trying hard myself at times and sometimes one seems to get eaten up by the daytime job..luckily i'm spending some days at the beach - off work-off responsibilities...good to breathe again..<br />...the cracks cry with lostClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-91322775411366303512011-11-07T07:58:12.049-05:002011-11-07T07:58:12.049-05:00Your writing style is very unique and gripping. I ...Your writing style is very unique and gripping. I enjoyed this poem very much. It is a strong piece.Laura Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02063154517087393398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1962841480087192036.post-41748733354484022172011-11-07T00:20:39.624-05:002011-11-07T00:20:39.624-05:00A beautiful narrative poem with some sad, yet true...A beautiful narrative poem with some sad, yet true, gut punching visuals...The opening with the black men, their abashed pride; the closing of marriage, divorce, birth, the things that give meat to life. Powerful imagry, thought provoking. A really beautiful work! Cheers!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com